Tuesday, 26 November 2013

Saturday, 23 November 2013


Term 4 Written Language

WALT write a character description of a person we know very well.
We know we have achieved this when we …
-    have written about the person’s physical appearance (the way they look).
-    have written about the person’s behaviour (how they speak or act).
-    have written about how they affect other people (what do they do to make you notice them).
-    have written about the person’s environment and belongings.
-    used descriptive words to make a picture in the mind of the reader

My Mum by Natalia Mulqueen

My mum is 30 and wears make up, black shoes, earrings, a black hair tie and brown short hair. Her skin is a normal colour. She has brown eyes, is tall and has a bit of blond hair and is skinny. She wears a necklace and rings and contact lenses and laughs a lot. She has long nails and short toenails. She sometimes wears glasses. She is a little bit freckly. Mum is very kind and is happy all the time. She loves seeing people, laughs and always has her phone with her. She tucks me in to bed. If there is an earthquake, she always comes into my room to check that I am all right. My mum always wears black tops and black tights. She works at State. At her work, she solves problems on the phone. She also does a lot of housework. She has her room outside.

Feedback:
You have tried to use some good adjectives in your description to create that picture about your Mum. I like the way you have tried to start sentences in different ways.

Next steps:
1.    Organise your description into paragraphs – what she physically looks like, about her personality/behaviour, and about her environment/belongings.
Try to join some of the shorter sentences together or expand some of the ideas further. E.g. “She has brown eyes, is tall and has a bit of blond hair and is skinny.” You could have perhaps broken these up 

Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Term 4     Music

We are learning to create a piece of music using a 4 beat pattern.

We know we have done that when…
-       we can use the ta,  ti-ti and sah symbols
-       we can clap the beat in time

-       we can work with a partner, put two patterns together and present the piece to the class.


Term 4   Discovery

We are learning to involve ourselves in activities during discovery and use one of Key Competencies
We know we have done that when we show we  
- use Language symbols and texts
- Self-manage our learning
- Participate and contribute
- Relate to others

Student voice:

I showed the Competency of Managing Self when I was skipping alone and showing what I could do outside.



I was able to work quietly in the quiet room during discovery.

Saturday, 28 September 2013

Sunday, 15 September 2013

Term 3 Reading


Miss Frampton:
What does a good reader do?

Natalia:

They skip unknown words and read to the end of the sentence.